Sunday, October 05, 2025

The Boy Who Spoke Too Much

Once upon a time, in a village nestled beside a whisper-quiet river, lived a boy named Barnaby. Barnaby wasn't just a chatterbox; he was a full-blown vocal hurricane. His parents, bless their cotton socks, had tried everything. They'd tied his tongue with polite requests, gagged him with stern warnings, and even attempted to muffle him with extra-fluffy pillows at bedtime (which he just talked through, muffled but undeterred).

One sunny morning, the village elder, a woman whose wrinkles held more wisdom than Barnaby had words, approached him. "Barnaby," she said, her voice a calm ripple in his sea of noise, "I have a task for you."

Barnaby, who had been mid-sentence about the intricate aerodynamics of a dandelion seed, paused. A rare, golden silence descended.

"I need you," the elder continued, "to deliver this basket of freshly baked silence-cookies to the grumpy ogre who lives on the Whispering Peak."

Barnaby’s eyes widened. "Silence-cookies? Do they make you quiet? Are they crunchy? What's the recipe? Can I have one now? How far is the peak? Is the ogre *really* grumpy? Does he have bad breath? Because I heard once that ogres who live on peaks often have a diet rich in… "

The elder held up a hand. "Just deliver the cookies, Barnaby. And remember, the ogre prefers to be addressed with a single, respectful utterance."

Barnaby, despite his inherent verbosity, felt a thrill. An adventure! He clutched the basket, a woven prison for the precious silence, and set off. The path up Whispering Peak was appropriately named. Every rustle of leaves, every babbling brook, seemed to whisper secrets he couldn't quite decipher. This, of course, only made him want to talk more. He narrated his journey, describing the scenery to the trees, offering unsolicited advice to a particularly slow snail, and even performing a dramatic monologue for a bewildered squirrel.

 


Finally, he reached the ogre's cave. It was dark, foreboding, and definitely *not* whispering. A low growl rumbled from within. Barnaby, momentarily struck by the sheer grumpiness of the atmosphere, remembered the elder's instruction: "a single, respectful utterance."

He took a deep breath. This was it. The ultimate test of his self-control. He pushed aside the dangling moss and peered into the cavern. A colossal figure, green and lumpy, sat hunched over a steaming cauldron. Its eyebrows alone looked like angry caterpillars.

Barnaby opened his mouth. He thought of "Hello." He considered "Greetings." He even briefly entertained "Yo, Ogre-dude!" But then, his natural instincts kicked in, like an untamed verbal geyser.

"Excuse me, Mr. Ogre, sir, I’ve brought you some rather delightful silence-cookies, freshly baked, you know, by the esteemed elder from the village, which, by the way, is a lovely little hamlet with a quiet river, though not as quiet as these cookies are supposed to make you, I presume, but anyway, she said you prefer a single utterance, which I’m trying very hard to adhere to, honestly, but it’s rather difficult for me as I’m known for my extensive vocabulary and generally amiable conversational style, so I hope you appreciate the effort I’m putting in to just say… "

He trailed off, suddenly realizing he had, in fact, just delivered a small speech. The ogre, who had slowly turned to face him, blinked. Slowly. Then, he let out a sound that wasn't quite a growl, but more of a surprised, guttural cough.

The ogre reached a massive hand into the basket. He pulled out a cookie and, to Barnaby's astonishment, popped it into his mouth. The ogre chewed. His eyes, previously narrowed into slits of eternal annoyance, widened just a fraction. He took another cookie. And another.

Soon, the basket was empty. The ogre sat, utterly silent, his eyes no longer grumpy, but merely… still. He looked at Barnaby, then back at the empty basket. Then, he slowly, deliberately, raised a single, enormous thumb.

Barnaby stared. "Does that mean you liked them? Was it the texture? The subtle hint of ginger? Or perhaps the existential void they create in one's vocal cords? Because I’m quite curious about the physiological effects of these silence-cookies and whether they’re temporary or permanent, and if permanent, what happens if you eat too many, like, do you just turn into a sentient mime? And also, what do you usually eat, because that cauldron looks suspiciously like it contains… "

The ogre, who had been enjoying a moment of blissful, cookie-induced tranquility, let out a sigh so deep it ruffled Barnaby’s hair. Then, with a surprisingly gentle flick of his wrist, he pointed to the door.

Barnaby took the hint. He walked all the way back down Whispering Peak, narrating his experience to the same trees, snail, and squirrel, describing in excruciating detail the ogre’s surprised expression and the enigmatic thumb.

From that day on, Barnaby still spoke a lot. A *lot*. But every now and then, when he was truly focused, or perhaps thinking about the magic of a silence-cookie, he would pause. And in that brief, precious silence, the villagers would swear they could hear the faint, contented sigh of a very particular ogre on Whispering Peak.

-- Pradeep K (Prady)


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