Feeling very sad about a lot of things.
A gnawing sensaton, in my heart, rings.
Inexplicable, strange, making little sense.
Want of affection seems to be a penal offense!
Under the guise of praise, a verbal sarcasm.
Punished by Shadow, flung into the Chasm.
The depth that I love and, as my own, cherish.
Now estranged, I have fallen in to perish.
I bow to thee, O silent assassin.
Give me but one gamble to win.
I bow to thee, O Chasm, deep.
At least a hug before I sleep.
12 comments:
Dearest friends,
I feel very strange. Kindly forgive me for this sad post.
kyu yaar,what happened...sure you can tell us...we're ur friends,rite???
hey wat happnd?? btw i liked tht poem of ur's...nice:)...and yes sometimes i just feel like cryin for no reason...sometimes u feel so strange...u don't even knw why u want to cry...but u just feel sad...at such times...i just talk to my frnds or read some book..helps me, hope u feel better:)
Dear pradeep,
You don't need to say sorry just because you unveiled your sadness before us. Sometimes things happen and the heart feels weighed down and sometimes the little bit of healing to it is expressing your heart and allowing others to embrace tht sad heart. Whatever it is that is weighing down that heart of yours. i hope it feels much better now to allow a smile. :) You take care now and do not stop expressing your heart.
Hope it's not some after-effects from V-day...
We are here to cheer you on, Pradeep!!!
Dear Ammu,
Thank you. Welcome to the Endless Chasm. Keep visiting. :)
Dear Praveen,
Of course you are all my friends. It was just one of those days, as Yashita has explained, yaar.
I will get over it soon. Thank you very much for your kindness.
Dear Yash,
Thank you, girl. Appreciate those words very much. I already feel much better reading your comment. :)
Dear Amy,
Thank you, dear. Sometimes, emotions play strange games on the mind.
But have no worries, I will never stop expressing myself, no matter what.
I remain forever indebted to your support and encouragement.
Dear QB,
Ah, v-day!
Yes, I believe that was what finally triggered it off.
Good observation, Queeny! And thank you!
are u better now ?
tc
hey man,
you dun need to be indebted to me..LOL we don't owe each other anything. Just keep going and we i believe are here to support you with our own will. :)
;) have a good day pradeep and keep that smile going..
*huggiz*
i'm sorry you feel that way prady. but it makes for a beautiful poem. i hope i didn't have a part in your sorrow.?
Sadness is a part of life.Welcome it. Nice poem.
Dear Nerine,
No, it had nothing to do with you. I am sure of that. And do not worry, I will be alright soon. :)
Dear Sneha,
You are right. That is a lesson I want people to acknowledge. I wonder how many of you seriously believe what you said. :)
**Now estranged, I have fallen in to perish.
loved those lines...u write beautifully mate...
Keshi.
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